On Twitter, I opened this blog up for questions and Richie (@McQ72)
asks “How many main characters should there be...??...Or really...what's
the maximum...??...”
In the past, I wrote six episodes of a show called My Hero. I started writing episodes in the
fourth series, when it had ten regular characters. The focus was always on the
‘hero’, played by Ardal O’Hanlon, who drove the main plot every week. His story
would often involve his wife, Janet (Emily Joyce) and/or his venal friend,
Arnie and/or his insane neighbour, Tyler. There was a B-plot, usually based
around the slimy doctor (Hugh Dennis) and the psychopathic receptionist Mrs
Raven (Geraldine McNulty), and a C-plot, often based around Janet’s snobby mum
and long-suffering dad. It was a large cast to handle and the rule was that
every character was in every episode. The upside was that you had ten different
attitudes to any given situation – and therefore ten types of joke. There were
lots of possible stories – which is why there are dozens of episodes. And it
meant that you didn’t need as many guests parts, since lots of roles could be
filled by regulars (ie. Janet’s mum could turn her had to being a florist, or
Mrs Raven could turn out to be very good at butchery etc). And the audience
would always rather see the regular characters than guests stars. Those are the
upsides. The downside was making sure enough people had lines and jokes. This
was hard work – but you always new it was possible, because every week, we just
about managed it.
The set up of My Hero was
not of my choosing. The show was conceived by a delightful man called Paul
Mendleson. The show I’m writing at the moment, Bluestone 42, was of my choosing, although the characters we have felt
like they had to reflect military reality. When Richard Hurst and I chose a
bomb disposal expert as a lead character in a sitcom, we discovered that his team
would be a minimum of four people (ATO, Number 2, Bleep and Military Escort).
We ended up with six in the team (ATO, Number 2, Bleep and a three man military
escort – to give us an array of perspectives and rivalries), plus an
interpreter, a padre, a Lieutenant Colonel. That’s nine characters – which,
again, is very tricky. We love all the characters dearly and giving them good
jokes and a satisfying story in 28 minutes is really hard work. Somehow, the
stories seems to follow the same pattern as My
Hero. Captain Nick Medhurst is ‘the hero’ and leads a story every week,
which normally involves one of the other characters. Mac and Rocket, the
squaddies, tend to have a B or C plot, and the other characters are normally
involved in the other plot.
So, maybe Nick has a problem with his new number two,
Towerblock – and turns to the Lt Col for advice – that’s the A Plot. Meanwhile
Bird has a running battle with Mary the padre over something – that’s the B Plot.
And Simon’s being pestered by Mac and Rocket over something. That’s the C Plot,
which may end up being the same size as the B Plot.
Making a Large Cast Work
Sitcoms can support a large casts. Some recent gems that
jump to mind would be Parks and
Recreation and Arrested Development.
Much older shows would be Dad’s Army
and The Phil Silvers Show (aka
Bilko). In each case, the show has a clear lead, eg. Leslie Nope in Parks and Rec, Michael Bluth in Arrested Development, or Bilko in The Phil Silvers Show – or central
relationship in Dad’s Army, between Mainwairing and Wilson.
It’s worth looking at those David Croft sitcoms which all
had large casts, but a fairly clear central hub. Hi-De-Hi seemed to focus around a few central characters and draw
in peripheral ones when needed. Allo Allo
was very much focussed on Rene Artois who was the ringmaster in a circus of
lunatics.
Keeping Focus
Based on all of the above, then, I would suggest, then, that
you ultimately know who your show is about. It should be about one key
character (eg. Miranda, David Brent, Mrs Brown, Basil Fawlty, Victor Meldrew,
Wolfy Smith, Leslie Nope) or a central relationship (eg. Edina & Saffy,
Rodney & Del Boy, Hacker & Sir Humphrey, Sharon & Tracey, Terry
& June, Fletcher & Godber). If you know this, you’ll know where your main
A plots are coming from. If you don’t, you’ll have split focus, you’ll not know
what you’re writing and the audience, should it make it that far, won’t know
what/who they’re watching. And ultimately, that character, or relationship,
should encapsulate what the show is about.
There are always exceptions, of course. One would be Modern Family, which has a large cast
and seems to split its focus equally between the three family units with no
clear ‘star’ or ‘hero’. Each episode is normally three plots that run along
side each other. But then again, we should not be surprised that this. Modern Family is always exceptional.
Avoiding Overlap
Whatever you decide, however many characters you end up
with, central or peripheral, you need to make sure that all your characters
have clear, contrasting voices and unique perspectives. If they are all given
the same task (eg taking part in a Secret Santa or running a pub quiz), they
should all instinctively go about it in completely different ways. When some
news breaks (eg. There’s no hot water or there’s a hurricane coming), they all
react in different ways, and then end up in conflict.
Quite often, I find, when you’re storylining a new show,
some characters generate stories and seem to end up in the thick of the action,
and other characters you thought were going to be funny or useful fall by the
wayside. It’s all part of the process, which is one of the reasons why
developing new sitcoms takes ages.
So, thanks, Richie. If anyone else has a question, tweet @sitcomgeek.
Thank you so much, I've written a comedy about a dysfunctional local council that initially was intended as a 60min per episode comedy drama series. The feedback I've received is that the world I've created is over populated and that it would work better as a 30 min comedy. The advice has been invaluable and the current draft is nice 30 min and the series now has nine characters including the central/lead character. I take on all constructive critique as I know its coming from people whose knowledge and experience is invaluable. Can I ask though is nine characters considered too many and how many characters is considered the standard/norm? Thanks.
ReplyDeleteHi, I am writing an idea for a comedy for tv. 30 minutes. I have ideas for a sitcom, but o am not a writer, how can we draft this? How do I sell the idea?
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